I don't have much to say about this one but I actually really liked it. Great characters. I think Kizarasunga's tribe is really interesting, like if you took the concept of wrath and based an entire society around it. I guess in another universe they'd be Khornate cultists.

Honestly, instead of the diplomacy plotline I think showing all-out war between them would be more interesting - the empire has more troops with better equipment, but Kizarunga's tribe is better motivated, has better training, and has the home field advantage. Showing the disparities between their cultures is the most interesting part anyway so seeing how each side approaches the war would have been awesome.